Correction You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!
What you see is what you get. Just a guy that loves adventure! I'm sorry, I had to do this.
[quote="DJ Coco"][b]Correction[/b]
You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end![/quote]
What you see is what you get. Just a guy that loves adventure!
I'm sorry, I had to do this.
[b]Xandalf[/b]
[quote]I never understood the principals of past tense[/quote]
I never understood the [b]principles[/b] of past tense
[b]koopatroopa323[/b]
[quote]I liked how beautiful it's feathers were[/quote]
I liked how beautiful [b]its[/b] feathers were
_________________
Can't take the heat, stop frolicking in the fire flowers.
I feel like all correction chances are gone now and I'll be known as the loser who didn't correct anyone
I feel like all correction chances are gone now :(
[size=50]and I'll be known as the loser who didn't correct anyone[/size]
_________________
(11/28/2020) Looking back at most of the things I did here many years ago makes me feel embarrassed :p But hey, we all started somewhere on the internet I guess. This site is basically the only remains of how I was years ago, and I can't look back at what me from over 5 years ago thought was "comedy" without cringing haha
I don't know if I'll return here some day, but I thank you all for the memories coming back to me after looking through my old posts. (which I advise you not to look through if you want to stay sane) If I do return, I do know of the new forum's existence, I just felt like looking back at posts here instead since I was more active on this one.
May the holidays go good if you are reading this around the time I am putting this text in my signature.
Correction phase time! Now it's your turn to look at people's corrections and check if there are any mistakes or redundant changes in them! If you point out one, you must provide a correct solution. If you point out a flaw and were right, you will gain a point. You can win up to 3 points so try not to point out more than 3 mistakes! If your proposed correction is wrong, you will lose 2 points.
Karen Kujou Spoiler:
Original Did you no? According to the host of this game you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so exited! Finale, here I come! I must have that game by almeans!
Correction Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Hypernova Spoiler:
Original As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
Correction As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.
AsteriskX Spoiler:
Original Oh, you gave so much presents to me! Thank you so much! Your really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definately the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Correction Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Xandalf Spoiler:
Original I never understanded the principels of past tents. How it works? I have no idea. You should probably ask some one like vinnyvideo, which is good at grammar.
Correction I never understood the principals of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.
LangtonSoft Spoiler:
Original Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
Correction Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.
DracoHandsome Spoiler:
Original Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Correction Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.
Burning Fox Spoiler:
Original As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
Correction As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
Technoflops Spoiler:
Original Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
Correction Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.
CouchTomato Spoiler:
Original Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Correction Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Blutorus Spoiler:
Original You never seize to surprise me blue hedgehog. I thunk that capsule you where in exploded in space. So theres more to you than just looking like me. Just, what are you any way? I can't let you life. You're adventuring days are coming to an end!
Correction You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!
Q-Nova Spoiler:
Original I've been learning english since four years now, and i'm still no good at it. Four years I wish I could understand the principles of grammer. I took afternoon classes each wednesday, and I still need to improve my self.
Correction I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.
koopatroopa323 Spoiler:
Original Yesterday, a bird flies over our head. I liked how butiful it's fethers were. Makes me wish I had a bird off my own.
Correction Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful its feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.
That's all I could find... Just that one above. (koopatroopa) and the one about 'principals' (Xandalf)
[quote="DJ Coco"]Correction phase time! Now it's your turn to look at people's corrections and check if there are any mistakes or redundant changes in them! If you point out one, you must provide a correct solution.
If you point out a flaw and were right, you will gain a point. You can win up to 3 points so try not to point out more than 3 mistakes! If your proposed correction is wrong, you will lose 2 points.
Karen Kujou
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Did you no? According to the host of this game you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so exited! Finale, here I come! I must have that game by almeans!
[b]Correction[/b]
Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means![/spoiler]
Hypernova
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
[b]Correction[/b]
As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.[/spoiler]
AsteriskX
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Oh, you gave so much presents to me! Thank you so much! Your really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definately the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
[b]Correction[/b]
Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you![/spoiler]
Xandalf
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
I never understanded the principels of past tents. How it works? I have no idea. You should probably ask some one like vinnyvideo, which is good at grammar.
[b]Correction[/b]
I never understood the [b]principals[/b] of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.[/spoiler]
LangtonSoft
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
[b]Correction[/b]
Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.[/spoiler]
DracoHandsome
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
[b]Correction[/b]
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.[/spoiler]
Burning Fox
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
[b]Correction[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.[/spoiler]
Technoflops
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
[b]Correction[/b]
Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.[/spoiler]
CouchTomato
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
[b]Correction[/b]
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.[/spoiler]
Blutorus
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
You never seize to surprise me blue hedgehog. I thunk that capsule you where in exploded in space. So theres more to you than just looking like me. Just, what are you any way? I can't let you life. You're adventuring days are coming to an end!
[b]Correction[/b]
You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end![/spoiler]
Q-Nova
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
I've been learning english since four years now, and i'm still no good at it. Four years I wish I could understand the principles of grammer. I took afternoon classes each wednesday, and I still need to improve my self.
[b]Correction[/b]
I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.[/spoiler]
koopatroopa323
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Yesterday, a bird flies over our head. I liked how butiful it's fethers were. Makes me wish I had a bird off my own.
[b]Correction[/b]
Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful [b]its[/b] feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.[/spoiler][/quote]
That's all I could find... Just that one above. (koopatroopa) and the one about 'principals' (Xandalf)
Too lazy to see what other people have already posted, so I'll just do a blanker correction.
DJ Coco wrote:
Correction phase time! Now it's your turn to look at people's corrections and check if there are any mistakes or redundant changes in them! If you point out one, you must provide a correct solution. If you point out a flaw and were right, you will gain a point. You can win up to 3 points so try not to point out more than 3 mistakes! If your proposed correction is wrong, you will lose 2 points.
Karen Kujou Spoiler:
Original Did you no? According to the host of this game you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so exited! Finale, here I come! I must have that game by almeans!
Correction Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Tomato Correction Did you know? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prizes! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumor has it that it's going to be a Steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Hypernova Spoiler:
Original As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
Correction As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.
Tomato Correction As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things come to an end eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
AsteriskX Spoiler:
Original Oh, you gave so much presents to me! Thank you so much! Your really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definately the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Correction Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Tomato Correction Oh, you gave me so many presents! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best Christmas I'll ever have, and it's all thanks to you!
Xandalf Spoiler:
Original I never understanded the principels of past tents. How it works? I have no idea. You should probably ask some one like vinnyvideo, which is good at grammar.
Correction I never understood the principals of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.
Tomato Correction Principals -> principles
LangtonSoft Spoiler:
Original Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
Correction Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.
Tomato Correction: No-one does not need a hyphen.
DracoHandsome Spoiler:
Original Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Correction Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.
No changes.
Burning Fox Spoiler:
Original As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
Correction As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
(Already corrected above). Also, if you were to use the dash it should be "I wish we had more time to spend together—but all good things come to an end eventually." Technoflops Spoiler:
Original Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
Correction Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.
(Already corrected above)
CouchTomato Spoiler:
Original Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Correction Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Blutorus Spoiler:
Original You never seize to surprise me blue hedgehog. I thunk that capsule you where in exploded in space. So theres more to you than just looking like me. Just, what are you any way? I can't let you life. You're adventuring days are coming to an end!
Correction You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!
Tomato Correction You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought the capsule you were in exploded in space. So there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring day are coming to an end!
Q-Nova Spoiler:
Original I've been learning english since four years now, and i'm still no good at it. Four years I wish I could understand the principles of grammer. I took afternoon classes each wednesday, and I still need to improve my self.
Correction I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.
(Already corrected above)
koopatroopa323 Spoiler:
Original Yesterday, a bird flies over our head. I liked how butiful it's fethers were. Makes me wish I had a bird off my own.
Correction Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful it's feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.
Tomato Correction Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful its feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own. (Very technically proper is it "It makes me wish..." but it's colloquially acceptable to leave out the "It" in this sentence... and no one actually says "It makes me wish," that it's actually less correct to change it.)
Too lazy to see what other people have already posted, so I'll just do a blanker correction.
[quote="DJ Coco"]Correction phase time! Now it's your turn to look at people's corrections and check if there are any mistakes or redundant changes in them! If you point out one, you must provide a correct solution.
If you point out a flaw and were right, you will gain a point. You can win up to 3 points so try not to point out more than 3 mistakes! If your proposed correction is wrong, you will lose 2 points.
Karen Kujou
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Did you no? According to the host of this game you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so exited! Finale, here I come! I must have that game by almeans!
[b]Correction[/b]
Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means![/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b]
Did you know? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prizes! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumor has it that it's going to be a Steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Hypernova
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
[b]Correction[/b]
As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.[/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things come to an end eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
AsteriskX
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Oh, you gave so much presents to me! Thank you so much! Your really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definately the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
[b]Correction[/b]
Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you![/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b]
Oh, you gave me so many presents! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best Christmas I'll ever have, and it's all thanks to you!
Xandalf
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
I never understanded the principels of past tents. How it works? I have no idea. You should probably ask some one like vinnyvideo, which is good at grammar.
[b]Correction[/b]
I never understood the principals of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.[/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b] Principals -> principles
LangtonSoft
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
[b]Correction[/b]
Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.[/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction:[/b] No-one does not need a hyphen.
DracoHandsome
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
[b]Correction[/b]
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.[/spoiler]
No changes.
Burning Fox
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplain, I waved her good bye. I wish we had more time to spent together. But all good things are coming to a end, eventualy. But i can't change my fealings about her. But I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceil them with in me.
[b]Correction[/b]
As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.[/spoiler]
(Already corrected above). Also, if you were to use the dash it should be "I wish we had more time to spend together—but all good things come to an end eventually."
Technoflops
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Hi, my name is mike. Im new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammer. I would gladly except any help that could help me improof! Unfortunately, there are no peoples around that want to help me.
[b]Correction[/b]
Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.[/spoiler]
(Already corrected above)
CouchTomato
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Ten year old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authoritys immediately if you see him some where. He was lastly seen with his class on they're journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
[b]Correction[/b]
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.[/spoiler]
Blutorus
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
You never seize to surprise me blue hedgehog. I thunk that capsule you where in exploded in space. So theres more to you than just looking like me. Just, what are you any way? I can't let you life. You're adventuring days are coming to an end!
[b]Correction[/b]
You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end![/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b]
You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought the capsule you were in exploded in space. So there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring day are coming to an end!
Q-Nova
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
I've been learning english since four years now, and i'm still no good at it. Four years I wish I could understand the principles of grammer. I took afternoon classes each wednesday, and I still need to improve my self.
[b]Correction[/b]
I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.[/spoiler]
(Already corrected above)
koopatroopa323
[spoiler][b]Original[/b]
Yesterday, a bird flies over our head. I liked how butiful it's fethers were. Makes me wish I had a bird off my own.
[b]Correction[/b]
Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful it's feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.[/spoiler]
[b]Tomato Correction[/b]
Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful its feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own. (Very technically proper is it "It makes me wish..." but it's colloquially acceptable to leave out the "It" in this sentence... and no one actually says "It makes me wish," that it's actually less correct to change it.)
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Correction phase is closed now! I'll have to discuss everything with Vinny before making a final judgment on all corrections handed in, and the corrections made to the corrections. @ CouchTomato: You shouldn't correct everything. After all, you can't win more than 3 points per round - just pick three mistakes you are certain about and stick with them. In order to make sure you don't lose too many points, I'll just take the first three corrections of yours and ignore the rest.
Correction phase is closed now! I'll have to discuss everything with Vinny before making a final judgment on all corrections handed in, and the corrections made to the corrections.
@ CouchTomato: You shouldn't correct everything. After all, you can't win more than 3 points per round - just pick three mistakes you are certain about and stick with them. In order to make sure you don't lose too many points, I'll just take the first three corrections of yours and ignore the rest.
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Wrong correction: "not" should be "know". Oversight: "prices" should be "prizes". Oversight: "Rumors have it" should be "Rumor has it" Oversight: "steam" should be "Steam". Redundant correction: "Finally" is unnecessary. The sentence can refer to the game's finale, and is therefore correct.
5 errors are unfortunately 3 too many - that means Karen Kujou has to leave the game early!
Hypernova's correction Spoiler:
As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.
Wrong correction: "As she is leaving" is wrong. "As she was leaving" was correct. Redundant corrections: The sentences didn't have to be reformatted. Although the correction did sound better, the original wasn't wrong.
2 mistakes are permitted in the first round, therefore Hypernova made it to the second round!
AsteriskX's correction Spoiler:
Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Oversight: "christmas" should be "Christmas". Oversight: "its" should be "it's".
AsteriskX may proceed to the next round
Corrections made by AsteriskX: "its" -> +1 "principals" (pointed out but no correction provided) -> +/- 0
Xandalf's correction Spoiler:
I never understood the principals of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.
Wrong correction: "principals" should be "principles".
One mistake - Xandalf proceeds to the second round!
LangtonSoft's correction Spoiler:
Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.
Wrong correction: "to improve" is wrong. "to" should be left out. Bypassing trap: "peoples" should have been corrected to "people". Rephrasing is not allowed.
Two mistakes are within the limit. Langton proceeds to the next round!
Corrections made by LangtonSoft: "I'll be sure" -> -2 "come / must come" -> -2 "was leaving" -> +1
DracoHandsome's correction Spoiler:
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.
Redundant correction: The semicolon didn't need to be removed, even if a period is better.
Nearly flawless, though - DracoHandsome will join the next round as well.
Burning Fox's correction Spoiler:
As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
Redundant correction: "her" didn't need to be cut. Redundant correction: "-" wasn't needed to combine the two sentences. Neither was it needed to cut all the "buts" Redundant correction: "are coming" was correct.
Burning Fox unfortunately leaves our game early...
Technoflops' correction Spoiler:
Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.
Redundant correction: "and" wasn't needed to combine the two sentences.
Technoflops remains in the game too.
CouchTomato's correction Spoiler:
Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Flawless correction. Needless to say, CouchTomato will be joining the next round too.
Corrections made by CouchTomato (shortened to the first three)
"know" -> +1 "prizes" -> +1 "Rumor has it" -> +1
Blutorus's correction Spoiler:
You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!
Redundant corrections: Various commas didn't need to be added or moved around.
Blutorus proceeds to the next round!
Corrections made by Blutorus: "know" -> +1 "prizes" -> +1 "it's" -> +1
Q-Nova's correction Spoiler:
I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.
Redundant correction: "no good" isn't wrong. Bypassing trap: "Four years" should've been corrected to "For years" Bypassing trap: "my self" should've been corrected to "myself".
I let "I've" to "I have" slide, because it's essentially the same thing, but I can't forgive the other things - unfortunately Q-Nova leaves the game.
koopatroopa323's correction Spoiler:
Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful it's feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.
Oversight: "it's" should have been corrected to "its".
A pet peeve of mine, but not enough to remove koopatroopa323 from the game. He remains in the game.
[size=150]ROUND 1 RESULTS[/size]
Karen Kujou's correction
[spoiler]Did you not? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prices! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumors have it that it's going to be a steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!
Wrong correction: "not" should be "know".
Oversight: "prices" should be "prizes".
Oversight: "Rumors have it" should be "Rumor has it"
Oversight: "steam" should be "Steam".
Redundant correction: "Finally" is unnecessary. The sentence can refer to the game's finale, and is therefore correct.
5 errors are unfortunately 3 too many - that means Karen Kujou has to leave the game early![/spoiler]
Hypernova's correction
[spoiler]As she is leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things are coming to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then I just have to conceal them within me.
Wrong correction: "As she is leaving" is wrong. "As she was leaving" was correct.
Redundant corrections: The sentences didn't have to be reformatted. Although the correction did sound better, the original wasn't wrong.
2 mistakes are permitted in the first round, therefore Hypernova made it to the second round![/spoiler]
AsteriskX's correction
[spoiler]Oh, you gave so many presents to me! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best christmas I'll ever have, and its all thanks to you!
Oversight: "christmas" should be "Christmas".
Oversight: "its" should be "it's".
AsteriskX may proceed to the next round
Corrections made by AsteriskX:
"its" -> +1
"principals" (pointed out but no correction provided) -> +/- 0[/spoiler]
Xandalf's correction
[spoiler]I never understood the principals of past tense. How does it work? I have no idea. You should probably ask someone like VinnyVideo, who is good at grammar.
Wrong correction: "principals" should be "principles".
One mistake - Xandalf proceeds to the second round![/spoiler]
LangtonSoft's correction
[spoiler]Hi, my name is Mike. I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me to improve! Unfortunately, there is no-one around that wants to help me.
Wrong correction: "to improve" is wrong. "to" should be left out.
Bypassing trap: "peoples" should have been corrected to "people". Rephrasing is not allowed.
Two mistakes are within the limit. Langton proceeds to the next round!
Corrections made by LangtonSoft:
"I'll be sure" -> -2
"come / must come" -> -2
"was leaving" -> +1[/spoiler]
DracoHandsome's correction
[spoiler]Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick. Any clues are appreciated.
Redundant correction: The semicolon didn't need to be removed, even if a period is better.
Nearly flawless, though - DracoHandsome will join the next round as well.[/spoiler]
Burning Fox's correction
[spoiler]As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved goodbye. I wished we had more time to spend together - but all good things come to an end, eventually. I can't change my feelings about her. I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.
Redundant correction: "her" didn't need to be cut.
Redundant correction: "-" wasn't needed to combine the two sentences. Neither was it needed to cut all the "buts"
Redundant correction: "are coming" was correct.
Burning Fox unfortunately leaves our game early...[/spoiler]
Technoflops' correction
[spoiler]Hi, my name is Mike, and I'm new here. I emigrated from another country, so please excuse my messy grammar. I would gladly accept any help that could help me improve! Unfortunately, there are no people around here that want to help me.
Redundant correction: "and" wasn't needed to combine the two sentences.
Technoflops remains in the game too.[/spoiler]
CouchTomato's correction
[spoiler]Ten-year-old Jason went missing the other day. Please help spread the word, and contact the authorities immediately if you see him somewhere. He was last seen with his class on their journey to the woods. His parents are worried sick; any clues are appreciated.
Flawless correction. Needless to say, CouchTomato will be joining the next round too.
Corrections made by CouchTomato (shortened to the first three)
"know" -> +1
"prizes" -> +1
"Rumor has it" -> +1[/spoiler]
Blutorus's correction
[spoiler]You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!
Redundant corrections: Various commas didn't need to be added or moved around.
Blutorus proceeds to the next round!
Corrections made by Blutorus:
"know" -> +1
"prizes" -> +1
"it's" -> +1[/spoiler]
Q-Nova's correction
[spoiler]I have been learning English for about four years, and I'm still not good at it. I wish I could understand the principles of grammar. I had taken afternoon classes each Wednesday, and I still need to improve my English.
Redundant correction: "no good" isn't wrong.
Bypassing trap: "Four years" should've been corrected to "For years"
Bypassing trap: "my self" should've been corrected to "myself".
I let "I've" to "I have" slide, because it's essentially the same thing, but I can't forgive the other things - unfortunately Q-Nova leaves the game.[/spoiler]
koopatroopa323's correction
[spoiler]Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful it's feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own.
Oversight: "it's" should have been corrected to "its".
A pet peeve of mine, but not enough to remove koopatroopa323 from the game. He remains in the game.[/spoiler]
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Quick reminder that not everyone has handed in their corrections yet! I think people would appreciate being able to proceed with the game, so it would be nice of you to take a look at your texts and hand in a correction
Quick reminder that not everyone has handed in their corrections yet! I think people would appreciate being able to proceed with the game, so it would be nice of you to take a look at your texts and hand in a correction ;)
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Hypernova, Xandalf and Technoflops still haven't handed in their correction yet - please do so within 3 days or the game will continue without you!
Hypernova, Xandalf and Technoflops still haven't handed in their correction yet -
please do so within 3 days or the game will continue without you!
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Original Text: I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got in sight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts, including their corrections. If only you haven't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text now. Thanks for nothing, jack ass.
Correction: I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.
CouchTomato
Quote:
Original Text: Florida is considered the lightning capitol of the United States. Thunderstorm's are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightening are low, its a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to loose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices, remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.
Correction: Florida is considered the lightning capital of the United States. Thunderstorms are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightning are low, it's a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to lose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices. Remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.
AsteriskX
Quote:
Original Text: Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
Correction: Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
koopatroopa323
Quote:
Original Text: For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!
Correction: For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn’t it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say!
DracoHandsome
Quote:
Original Text: It was a nice sunny sunday afternoon, when Jake decided to go for a walk. The whether reports had forecasted an upcoming storm, but the sun has shined so bright, Jake thought to himself they are false. Suddenly a wild storm came up, and it started pouring heavy! Poor Jake has become all soaked! So Jake thought to himself "I should of known and trusted the reports!". I hope he'll take an umbrella with him next time!
Correction: It was a nice sunny Sunday afternoon when Jake decided to go for a walk. The weather reports had forecast an upcoming storm, but the sun had been shining so brightly, Jake thought to himself they were false. Suddenly a wild storm came up and it started pouring heavily! Poor Jake became all soaked! So Jake thought to himself, "I should have known and trusted the reports!" I hope he takes an umbrella with him next time!
LangtonSoft
Quote:
Original Text: He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.
Correction: He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.
Sorry for the delay. Correction phase starts now!
Blutorus
[quote]Original Text:
I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got in sight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts, including their corrections. If only you haven't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text now. Thanks for nothing, jack ass.
Correction:
I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.[/quote]
CouchTomato
[quote]Original Text:
Florida is considered the lightning capitol of the United States. Thunderstorm's are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightening are low, its a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to loose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices, remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.
Correction:
Florida is considered the lightning capital of the United States. Thunderstorms are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightning are low, it's a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to lose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices. Remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.[/quote]
AsteriskX
[quote]Original Text:
Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
Correction:
Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.[/quote]
koopatroopa323
[quote]Original Text:
For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!
Correction:
For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn’t it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say![/quote]
DracoHandsome
[quote]Original Text:
It was a nice sunny sunday afternoon, when Jake decided to go for a walk. The whether reports had forecasted an upcoming storm, but the sun has shined so bright, Jake thought to himself they are false. Suddenly a wild storm came up, and it started pouring heavy! Poor Jake has become all soaked! So Jake thought to himself "I should of known and trusted the reports!". I hope he'll take an umbrella with him next time!
Correction:
It was a nice sunny Sunday afternoon when Jake decided to go for a walk. The weather reports had forecast an upcoming storm, but the sun had been shining so brightly, Jake thought to himself they were false. Suddenly a wild storm came up and it started pouring heavily! Poor Jake became all soaked! So Jake thought to himself, "I should have known and trusted the reports!" I hope he takes an umbrella with him next time![/quote]
LangtonSoft
[quote]Original Text:
He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.
Correction:
He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.[/quote]
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Posting here mainly because the topic is supposed to be unlocked during corrections.
DJ Coco wrote:
I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.
I love you too.
Posting here mainly because the topic is supposed to be unlocked during corrections.
[quote="DJ Coco"]I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.[/quote]
I love you too.
Six comments...In a row? And I got warned for doing the same even though I didn't know that was bad at the time.
So what's happening with this game anyway? Is this the final round or somthing?
EDIT: ok, I guess it's done...That was...An interesting experience...
Six comments...[size=50]In a row? And I got warned for doing the same even though I didn't know that was bad at the time.[/size]
So what's happening with this game anyway? Is this the final round or somthing?
EDIT: ok, I guess it's done...That was...An interesting experience...:blank:
Last edited by AsteriskX on Sun Oct 04, 2015 7:32 pm, edited 4 times in total. _________________
Original Text: Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
Correction: Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
1. Line-up should be lineup. 2. "The chosen guy by you" should be "The guy chosen by you" (there's another, but I'll leave it to someone else cause I actually did this second)
LangtonSoft
Quote:
Original Text: He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.
Correction: He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.
3. so I still borrowed him some cash -> so I still lent him some cash.
Also, for the future, can you implement a time limit? Like at the very longest, one week? That was kinda ridiculous.
AsteriskX
[quote]Original Text:
Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.
Correction:
Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.[/quote]
1. [i]Line-up should be lineup.[/i]
2. [i]"The chosen guy by you" should be "The guy chosen by you"[/i]
(there's another, but I'll leave it to someone else cause I actually did this second)
LangtonSoft
[quote]Original Text:
He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.
Correction:
He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.[/quote]
3. [i]so I still borrowed him some cash -> so I still lent him some cash.[/i]
Also, for the future, can you implement a time limit? Like at the very longest, one week? That was kinda ridiculous.
Posting here mainly because the topic is supposed to be unlocked during corrections.
Damn, I totally forgot about that. Thanks.
[quote="Blutorus"]Posting here mainly because the topic is supposed to be unlocked during corrections.[/quote]Damn, I totally forgot about that. Thanks.
_________________
Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
Let's see how I can get even more points deducted from my score.
koopatroopa323 wrote:
Original Text: For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!
Correction: For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say!
"it seems quiet ridiculous to us" - "quiet" should be "quite"
"people that still thinks" - "thinks" should be "think"
Let's see how I can get even more points deducted from my score.
[quote="koopatroopa323"]
Original Text:
For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!
Correction:
For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say!
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Also, for the future, can you implement a time limit? Like at the very longest, one week? That was kinda ridiculous.
Yep, from now on it's a week max
[quote="CouchTomato"]Also, for the future, can you implement a time limit? Like at the very longest, one week? That was kinda ridiculous.[/quote]Yep, from now on it's a week max
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Cliax Codec is a combination of top-down and third-person shooter. The gameplay will blend platforming, puzzle and shmup elements together to create a unique gameplay experience. You will take control of four playable characters which rise against a team that seemingly wants to take over the world - but are their motives really that cliché, or are there deeper motives behind their actions?
[*]"it seems quiet ridiculous to us" - "quiet" should be "quite" [*]"people that still thinks" - "thinks" should be "think"[/list]
k I lost bye
[quote="LangtonSoft"]
[*]"it seems quiet ridiculous to us" - "quiet" should be "quite"
[*]"people that still thinks" - "thinks" should be "think"[/list][/quote]
k I lost bye
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(11/28/2020) Looking back at most of the things I did here many years ago makes me feel embarrassed :p But hey, we all started somewhere on the internet I guess. This site is basically the only remains of how I was years ago, and I can't look back at what me from over 5 years ago thought was "comedy" without cringing haha
I don't know if I'll return here some day, but I thank you all for the memories coming back to me after looking through my old posts. (which I advise you not to look through if you want to stay sane) If I do return, I do know of the new forum's existence, I just felt like looking back at posts here instead since I was more active on this one.
May the holidays go good if you are reading this around the time I am putting this text in my signature.
Six comments...In a row? And I got warned for doing the same even though I didn't know that was bad at the time.
Double posts are not permitted unless 1) There lie 24 hours inbetween 2) There is relevant information to be added
I had to post six times in a row to mark the thread as unread so people can see there was an update. Posting six times in a row for no reason with no significant time span inbetween breaks the rules, though.
AsteriskX wrote:
So what's happening with this game anyway? Is this the final round or somthing?
EDIT: ok, I guess it's done...That was...An interesting experience...
What made you think that? The game is still going. Round 3 will start soon which may or may not be the final round.
Correction phase is over now!
Also, I forgot to respond to this earlier.
[quote="AsteriskX"]Six comments...[size=50]In a row? And I got warned for doing the same even though I didn't know that was bad at the time.[/size][/quote]Double posts are not permitted unless
1) There lie 24 hours inbetween
2) There is relevant information to be added
I had to post six times in a row to mark the thread as unread so people can see there was an update. Posting six times in a row for no reason with no significant time span inbetween breaks the rules, though.
[quote="AsteriskX"]So what's happening with this game anyway? Is this the final round or somthing?
EDIT: ok, I guess it's done...That was...An interesting experience...:blank:[/quote]What made you think that? The game is still going. Round 3 will start soon which may or may not be the final round.
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