Sloshy wrote:
DreiDreiDesert wrote:
Your first post was already reported, but this is unacceptable content for a family-friendly MFGG. Fetish work and explicit sexuality has its place, and in view of an intended child audience is not that place.
your contributing literally nothing to my project topic rn. this is not a topic for you to start a litle crusade or debate this. please stop. start your own thread about this and stay out of mine pls if you have nothing to contrbute
He's not wrong though. Some parts of your work are almost considered as sexual content with the obvious fetish idea combined with erotic designs that might be quite disturbing for everyone. You have a shark character that features a quite exposed body and inappropriate clothing that's suited for a porno, the same can be said for the prawn character.
You really do need to step back away from your fetish, as you seem to over sexualise everything and attempt to incorporate your own fetish into nearly everything that you do.
Anyways, I've tried out a design that goes against to your current style.
Spoiler:
A shark idea as a humanoid with eating as it's gimmick is extremely difficult idea to make appealing design that doesn't come off as disturbing and oddly sexual. Here, I've still had the basic inspiration from sharks and eating. I've removed all humanoid features and went for a animalistic Kirby and Starfy design style, which makes it less disturbing and more cute and charming. I've tried going for distinct, simple character with it's oversized toothy smiling tooth to capture some charm.
I think what I've designed looks better and less disturbing than what you've created. Though, it's really your and everyone's opinion.
[quote="Sloshy"][quote="DreiDreiDesert"]Your first post was already reported, but this is unacceptable content for a family-friendly MFGG. Fetish work and explicit sexuality has its place, and in view of an intended child audience is not that place.[/quote]your contributing literally nothing to my project topic rn. this is not a topic for you to start a litle crusade or debate this. please stop. start your own thread about this and stay out of mine pls if you have nothing to contrbute[/quote]
He's not wrong though. Some parts of your work are almost considered as sexual content with the obvious fetish idea combined with erotic designs that might be quite disturbing for everyone. You have a shark character that features a quite exposed body and inappropriate clothing that's suited for a porno, the same can be said for the prawn character.
You really do need to step back away from your fetish, as you seem to over sexualise everything and attempt to incorporate your own fetish into nearly everything that you do.
Anyways, I've tried out a design that goes against to your current style.
[spoiler][img]http://i.imgur.com/g8onT2w.png[/img][/spoiler]
A shark idea as a humanoid with eating as it's gimmick is extremely difficult idea to make appealing design that doesn't come off as disturbing and oddly sexual. Here, I've still had the basic inspiration from sharks and eating. I've removed all humanoid features and went for a animalistic Kirby and Starfy design style, which makes it less disturbing and more cute and charming. I've tried going for distinct, simple character with it's oversized toothy smiling tooth to capture some charm.
I think what I've designed looks better and less disturbing than what you've created. Though, it's really your and everyone's opinion.