[center][img]https://i.imgur.com/EaS7IiR.png[/img][/center] Hello, guys! I showing a new hack. I working on my hack with faster progress. Also, the new hack contains vanilla. I need improve level design and skills. [b]Concept:[/b] This hack with level design, aesthetics, gimmick and atmosphere. Similar as Super Mario World looks better and inspired. Also, I learned Lunar Magic with physics. I recently doing ASM, most innovation. [b]Worlds List:[/b] World 1: Mushroom Peaking World 2: Flora Plains World 3: Cave Undergone World 4: Mountain Top-Bridge World 5: Deku Forest World 6: Slippery Hills World 7: Bowser's Hellish World 8: Starworld Rush World 9: Rainbow Happiest [b]Screenshots:[/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/qSHeXDW.png[/img] New Nintendo Presents Logo HDMA. This HDMA effects makes pixelated color with two palettes. [img]http://i.imgur.com/GYNnWpf.png[/img] New title screen has been improved, also my hack contains font “Avant Star”. better or bad? [img]http://i.imgur.com/KYlIz67.png[/img] The story of my hack has been improved. This English contains grammar and spelling to improve English. Need a class school. Make English that 100% better. [color=#FFFF00][b]NEW![/b][/color] Userbar: [url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=19734][img]http://i.imgur.com/mcG4CZJ.png[/img][/url] I probably more levels will be coming soon. Give feedback and comments!

Why were Mario and Luigi in Brazil Why did Bowser get captured Why did Peach summon dark fire? Did she start a macabre ritual? Also, It's hard to read yellow thin text in front of an orange gradient.

Your English is bad.

I didn't know Gregor's hack was still in production

[quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503238#p503238]SuperArthurBros[/url]"]Why were Mario and Luigi in Brazil Why did Bowser get captured Why did Peach summon dark fire? Did she start a macabre ritual? Also, It's hard to read yellow thin text in front of an orange gradient.[/quote] Where does it say anything about Brazil? Or any of this? :confused: did it get edited out or are you referencing stuff from a former topic? [quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503243#p503243]Willsaber[/url]"]Your English is bad.[/quote] Indeed, but this is pretty close to a flame. Lighten up on him some please :)

[quote="Heraga"]I didn't know Gregor's hack was still in production[/quote] Nah it's still deader than a dodo.

[quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503245#p503245]HylianDev[/url]"] Where does it say anything about Brazil? Or any of this? :confused: did it get edited out or are you referencing stuff from a former topic? [/quote] [quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503237#p503237]MarioStar100[/url]"][img]http://i.imgur.com/LjNB9jp.png[/img][/quote]

[quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503248#p503248]SuperArthurBros[/url]"][quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503245#p503245]HylianDev[/url]"] Where does it say anything about Brazil? Or any of this? :confused: did it get edited out or are you referencing stuff from a former topic? [/quote] [quote="[url=http://phpbb.mfgg.net/viewtopic.php?p=503237#p503237]MarioStar100[/url]"][img]http://i.imgur.com/LjNB9jp.png[/img][/quote][/quote] Oh haha. Thanks. To be fair, that's barely a step down from the canon SMW intro text

The text on the Title screen is also a little hard to read because its so small and has a lot of colors despite being on an already colorful background. You might also want to work on that storyline a bit, it currently makes no sense. Why don't you try something like: "Mario, Luigi, and Peach were on vacation in Brazil. When the Bros. least suspected it, Bowser summoned dark fire to snatch Princess Peach! Hurry up, Mario!" That might be too many words to fit into that space (idk how rom hacking works), but maybe something along those lines would work better. :)

So he's back with another hack? He never even finishes any hacks he creates... He should just create another hack called: [b]Mario & Luigi English Bad[/b] :thumbsup:

[quote="Random.NICK"]He never even finishes any hacks he creates...[/quote] He did finish one.

[quote="Willsaber"]Your English is bad.[/quote] Your insults are bad.

[quote="theundead101"][quote="Willsaber"]Your English is bad.[/quote] Your insults are bad.[/quote] That was an insult?

[quote="SuperArthurBros"][quote="theundead101"][quote="Willsaber"]Your English is bad.[/quote] Your insults are bad.[/quote] That was an insult?[/quote] The topic author has in numerous situations not bothered to communicate in English more than just using a translator soooo at this point its less of an insult but more of a fact. Look at his other hack topics in here and his posts on SMW Central.

[quote="DarkSideStrike"][quote="SuperArthurBros"][quote="theundead101"] Your insults are bad.[/quote] That was an insult?[/quote] The topic author has in numerous situations not bothered to communicate in English more than just using a translator soooo at this point its less of an insult but more of a fact. Look at his other hack topics in here and his posts on SMW Central.[/quote] I just don't like seeing users getting bashed. Like so what if he can't speak good English. It may get annoying to read but we shouldn't single him out just because English isn't his first language.

[quote="theundead101"][quote="DarkSideStrike"][quote="SuperArthurBros"] That was an insult?[/quote] The topic author has in numerous situations not bothered to communicate in English more than just using a translator soooo at this point its less of an insult but more of a fact. Look at his other hack topics in here and his posts on SMW Central.[/quote] I just don't like seeing users getting bashed. Like so what if he can't speak good English. It may get annoying to read but we shouldn't single him out just because English isn't his first language.[/quote] You don't quite know the full extent of it. This has been going on [i]here[/i] since 2015, I think. Can't speak for SMWC. Berkian will continually start new hacks and cancel old ones, with each post being marred by nearly unintelligible English. In fact, communicating in that way is even discouraged in the rules.

[quote="theundead101"] I just don't like seeing users getting bashed. Like so what if he can't speak good English. It may get annoying to read but we shouldn't single him out just because English isn't his first language.[/quote] "Baawwww bawww bawwwwwww" 'Bashing' is a pretty large exaggeration of my post's tone. I brought up one point, which at this point is more than fair. Berkian constantly says his English is improving, but it never actually has. At least, not markedly. Time and time again, somebody improve's his in-game exposition, but he consistently ignores the improvements and continues to write in a nonsensical dialect. I wasn't complaining about him, just his writing. Which is, I emphasize, [i]objectively[/i] awful.

[size=200][b]Update time![/b][/size] After 5+ days of working. I finished level 1-1, unmotivated. I will be continue working on my hack. More screenshots: [color=#00FF00][b]1-1: Mushroom Island[/b][/color] [img]http://i.imgur.com/queTjg2.png[/img] This level contains aesthetics and atmosphere. Includes HDMA effects. [img]http://i.imgur.com/s8bQiHF.png[/img] Whoa! The coin and Yoshi coins needs collect per 100 to gain 1UP. [img]http://i.imgur.com/mi2n3TZ.png[/img] The chargin’ chucks are back! Can Mario attack Chargin’ Chucks? [img]http://i.imgur.com/ynhMKOs.png[/img] Mario entering in the cave. More precious. The Red Koopa flying into the cave. [img]http://i.imgur.com/SYUBcTS.png[/img] Koopas are bouncing! Bounce! Bounce! Bounce! I dunno. That’s all! I will add more levels will be soon! Next week, this hack is slower progress due to school.

Colorful as usual

Very pretty HDMA effects