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 Post subject: Re: A Plumber's Journey!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 11:01 am 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 1:17 pm 
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Please fix the text wrapping so the word is not being typed out in the same line when it's not gonna fit.
Also, I think it would look a lot nicer if the textbox's height adjusted to the space the text's gonna occupy, instead of being a fixed size that's mostly too big.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 5:50 pm 
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I fixed the textbox again

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:43 pm 
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Gatete wrote:
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I don't think you fixed either of those, you just made the box a speech balloon.

 
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2017 7:44 pm 
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I really do not like the art style of this game. Mario and Luigi look butt ugly. Not to insult you, but I feel that this art style does not look good

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Thatgamerguy2234 wrote:
I really do not like the art style of this game. Mario and Luigi look butt ugly. Not to insult you, but I feel that this art style does not look good

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 19, 2017 10:06 am 
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Gatete wrote:
I fixed the textbox again

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I think that you should have it check the height of the text it'll display before drawing the box and then set the height based on that. I think it will look better.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:08 pm 
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Thatgamerguy2234 wrote:
I really do not like the art style of this game. Mario and Luigi look butt ugly. Not to insult you, but I feel that this art style does not look good

I think the visuals are really interesting actually, but I guess different people will have different opinions. I personally would like them to remain this way.

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Are you people complaining for the sake of complaining?

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Backgrounds does also change when switching worlds on the map

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 12:53 pm 
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Gatete wrote:
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 05, 2017 3:12 pm 
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 05, 2017 3:28 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2017 11:59 pm 
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"you were" and "allowed" is redundant here, and "called to unclog our toilet" would read easier as, "here to unclog our toilet".

So: "No plumbers past this area unless here to unclog our toilet."

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PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2017 12:40 am 
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Willsaber wrote:
"you were" and "allowed" is redundant here, and "called to unclog our toilet" would read easier as, "here to unclog our toilet".

So: "No plumbers past this area unless here to unclog our toilet."


There is no redundancy here. It COULD be omitted and the sentence would still make sense but it would depend on what kind of tone you want the sign to have. I think it reads fine as is despite being a little wordy but I would recommend replacing "area" with "point". Point is the more appropriate term for this phrase and it will flow much better.

If you did want to shorten it, maybe something like

"No plumbers past this point!

(Unless here to unclog our toilet)"


Having the latter as a footnote in brackets would be more humorous imo.

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PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2017 6:53 pm 
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Syaxamaphone wrote:
There is no redundancy here. It COULD be omitted and the sentence would still make sense but it would depend on what kind of tone you want the sign to have. I think it reads fine as is despite being a little wordy but I would recommend replacing "area" with "point". Point is the more appropriate term for this phrase and it will flow much better.

The issue with the wordiness is that it totally throws off the comedic timing.

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