[img]https://i.imgur.com/XcztiK6.png[/img] The new logo of Nintendo Presents with HDMA effects. The HDMA effects are fire and hell! OH HELL YEAH!!! [img]https://i.imgur.com/aYmcVjg.png[/img] This story of my hack has been fixed, but no errors with grammar story on my hack. No problems.

[quote="Ethereality"]The HDMA effects are fire and hell! OH HELL YEAH!!! [/quote] D: Christ [quote="Ethereality"] [img]https://i.imgur.com/ZVAiobX.png[/img] New palette has been changed. The saturation of colors most identical colorfulness (e.g. 200%). That palette is better and cute.[/quote] Personally, I think it looks ugly, it has too much brown. [quote="Ethereality"] [img]https://i.imgur.com/aYmcVjg.png[/img] This story of my hack has been fixed, but no errors with grammar story on my hack. No problems.[/quote] It's the same exact thing as before.

[quote="SuperArthurBros"] Personally, I think it looks ugly, it has too much brown.[/quote] [img]https://i.imgur.com/Ylr2WIY.png[/img] I changed the new palette a bit. such as the extreme desert. I hope improving palettes. I dunno.

[quote="SuperArthurBros"] [quote="Ethereality"] [img]https://i.imgur.com/ZVAiobX.png[/img] New palette has been changed. The saturation of colors most identical colorfulness (e.g. 200%). That palette is better and cute.[/quote] Personally, I think it looks ugly, it has too much brown.[/quote] But can't you see? It's not just too much brown, it's too much brown...IN [i]HELL![/i] That brown [i]sacrificed its family to the Devil,[/i] and now it can utilize awe-inspiring psychic powers to [i]liquefy Mario's brain and exact bloody malice on the mortal world that once shunned it for its morbid eccentricities![/i] Only Bowser himself can save you NOW, mudder truckers! [quote="Ethereality"]OH HELL YEAH!!![/quote]

[quote="soopakoopa"][quote="SuperArthurBros"] [quote="Ethereality"] [img]https://i.imgur.com/ZVAiobX.png[/img] New palette has been changed. The saturation of colors most identical colorfulness (e.g. 200%). That palette is better and cute.[/quote] Personally, I think it looks ugly, it has too much brown.[/quote] But can't you see? It's not just too much brown, it's too much brown...IN [i]HELL![/i] That brown [i]sacrificed its family to the Devil,[/i] and now it can utilize awe-inspiring psychic powers to [i]liquefy Mario's brain and exact bloody malice on the mortal world that once shunned it for its morbid eccentricities![/i] Only Bowser himself can save you NOW, mudder truckers! [quote="Ethereality"]OH HELL YEAH!!![/quote][/quote] This palette already has been improved with saturation, In the ledge tile contains a palette with saturation is improved. Stop ignoring about the bad palettes. My palette is improved.

[quote="Ethereality"][quote="soopakoopa"][quote="SuperArthurBros"] Personally, I think it looks ugly, it has too much brown.[/quote] But can't you see? It's not just too much brown, it's too much brown...IN [i]HELL![/i] That brown [i]sacrificed its family to the Devil,[/i] and now it can utilize awe-inspiring psychic powers to [i]liquefy Mario's brain and exact bloody malice on the mortal world that once shunned it for its morbid eccentricities![/i] Only Bowser himself can save you NOW, mudder truckers! [quote="Ethereality"]OH HELL YEAH!!![/quote][/quote] This palette already has been improved with saturation, In the ledge tile contains a palette with saturation is improved. Stop ignoring about the bad palettes. My palette is improved.[/quote] I was replying to SuperArthurBros, not you. Yes, your new pallet does look better. Still, we'd really like to see some levels, or the overworld, or a boss, or...well, anything. I mean yeah, you have nice color schemes. Nice color schemes does not a good hack make.

Update: The 1-1 is done! My hack is started, I improved the level design and aesthetics is better. [b][color=#00FF40]Flavored Hills[/color][/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/PreHu2m.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/PX1mZkF.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/Yih7kcu.png[/img] Mario gets a Chargin' Chuck! MAMA MIA! In addition, more enemies are placed with an easier difficulty. [img]http://i.imgur.com/nMKk9x6.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/0M6zMUp.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/CEAPkr3.png[/img] Lots of coins, more coins, much easier and better. Yoshi Dragon Coins gets a 5-Yoshi Dragon Coin them collect, Mario can find Yoshi Dragon Coins, don't lose! [img]http://i.imgur.com/EbXHUE2.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ZN39Cuc.png[/img] Out of fight in enemies, The goal is to end! Woohoo! [img]http://i.imgur.com/a0WKoHt.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/uzvhUh9.png[/img] Mario enters from the cave! The small difficulty is fine. My palette has learned saturation and colorfulness. [img]http://i.imgur.com/4QljXeY.png[/img] The Nintendo Logo Presents with HDMA effects is done! I learned with Effect Tool, how about learning HDMA with UberASM on Lunar Magic. [img]http://i.imgur.com/qMbBGw1.png[/img] WHOA! The title screen with HDMA effects has been updated. A new palette like as a desert, my palette has been updated! [img]http://i.imgur.com/fPxPPog.png[/img] The history of my hack has been improved. I using Grammarly to improve English.

But the story is still written the same way as 3 updates ago

After minor days, I've updated a new logo Nintendo Presents, title screen, and story. Also, now some screenshots: [img]http://i.imgur.com/xnnbueW.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/IjHgNp6.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/RPdD2sV.png[/img] I make more levels will be coming soon! Stay tuned! :)

that production logo is barely legible

New update: A new story in Toad’s House has been inserted! Here's a screenshot: [img]https://i.imgur.com/LIPO1FX.png[/img] A new story has been inserted from Lunar Magic.

Why is the sky green? Is the sky in Hell always green? Are we still in Hell? Is Hell still a part of this game? Why does Toad live at Yoshi's house? Why are there suddenly comics? [i]What do comics have to do with anything? What is happening in this game? [b]What is "The Dimension?" Is it Hell? Is it comic books? What is life?![/b][/i]

Why is Mario looking for Yoshi in Toad's house? And why does Toad have a "Yoshi" mailbox? (Or is Toad mental and having a identity crisis?)

Are you actually trying to make a story which makes no sense?

I don't think the problem I so much the story itself, it's just kinda badly translated, it's that he can't seem to stick to [i]one single story and theme[/i] for more than a few weeks. First you're a Beach Koopa trying to rescue Luigi from Bowser, then you're Mario trying to retrieve some keys that Bowser stole from Hell...[b]somehow,[/b] and now it's Mario going on an adventure in what is apparently the land of comic books, where the ground is purple and the sky is green. ...Just like in a comic book...?

Little update: A new message box from Toad's House is relatively improved. Yoshi is removed from message box, changed to the Toad. Is absolute. Wohooo!!! Here's a screenshot: [img]https://i.imgur.com/KE9nSgi.png[/img] No problems. Give more constructive and feedback! That's all! :biggrin:

[quote="Ethereality"][img]https://i.imgur.com/KE9nSgi.png[/img][/quote] "Dimension"?

if you want to make it look like toad's house maybe change the 'yoshi' on the mailbox to say 'toad'

[quote="SuperArthurBros"][quote="Ethereality"][img]https://i.imgur.com/KE9nSgi.png[/img][/quote] "Dimension"?[/quote] Hell. I think.

Yeah, I would definitely make the "Yoshi" sign say "Toad."