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 Post subject: Re: Thunder Dragon presents: PSYCUTLERY
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2016 4:54 pm 
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Psid, that is really awesome and I think I'm going to have to steal it. XD Or in any case, use it as a direction for my next redesign. You'll be mentioned somewhere in the credits either way. :thumbsup:

:laugh: Thanks! And Thanks everyone! :thumbsup:

Though, I didn't think of the watermelon and the bow when I designed it. But thinking of it, It could make the logo slightly too complex.

But, still simple is usually the best when it comes to logos. At least that my logo managed to inspire you for the new logo!

 
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2016 5:22 pm 
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The bow I would at least attempt to add in as it's kind of an integral part of the character, though if it looks too busy I could understand that. The watermelon was a joke though :D

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2016 10:20 pm 
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Okay, here's another vector work-in-progress thing based on the ideas posted here:


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2016 10:49 pm 
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:agree:

It's worlds apart from the original logo. Really nice work, I love the personality it has and it speaks a lot more about the game itself. Also, unlike the original logo, this one lends itself really nicely to the more hand drawn, curvy look.

Possibly the only concern I'd have is maybe it's a bit tall? Not sure if that can be helped though.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2016 9:09 pm 
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Will just have to make room on the title screen then. ;P
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2016 10:24 pm 
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That looks like a nice logo so far! It looks a lot more psychic-y and overall better than the original logo, in my opinion. I'd love to see how it looks once you put in the game's title screen. :)

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 2:15 pm 
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td how you spiced that logo up is pretty nice love the outline and the general shading, well done sir.

However the bottom of the spork or whatever looks very uneven, the right and left side dont really look like each other and its kinda odd to look at.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 4:50 pm 
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Yeah, looking at the asymmetry down there, I can see that being a tad jarring. Easily fixed, though! Anybody else have any thoughts before I go on ahead and stick it in the game/my sig?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:31 pm 
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Maybe design a more horizontal-friendly version for banners and such?

The logo is great for a title or box design, and definitely use it for those, but for a signature it's not ideal. So I would just design an alternate logo for that sort of thing. Use the same lettering design, just find a way to modify the overall layout for signatures and such.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:31 pm 
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To get perfect symmetry in Inkscape model only one half, and make sure all the nodes on the symmetry axis line up by selecting them all and just setting the X-position for all of them at once. Copy the whole thing, CTRL+ALT+V (to paste in place) and sign the width with a minus to mirror it. If you enable snapping in the toolbar on the right you can then just align it easily. There will be a noticable seam inbetween the two halves though, but you can just combine the objects to get rid of it. Hope that helps :)

Now onto the logo itself - it looks a lot better than what you had previously! I'm not really too fond on the outline effect myself, though. For one, I think it'd be best to animate it ingame, but even for a stand-alone image to put into sigs, the effect looks... unfitting? It doesn't really look psychic to me, personally, more like... electrifying? I'd go with something similar to Psychonauts myself, which was radial blur if I'm not mistaken? Aside from that, I can't help but feel like it's a bit left-heavy... ironically that never bothered me with the old logo but it does here as there's supposed to be some symmetry. Maybe try sizing down the "Psy" part? Idk, it might be just me. Other than that, everything's fantastic. Especially the spork itself looks great :D

EDIT: As for a more horizontal alternative logo to use in sigs, maybe replace the t with the spork? The spork kind of has that t-shape with the bow.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2016 8:21 pm 
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Shortened the spork a little, and made everything slightly more symmetrical. Trying a simpler outline, since the wavy one would look kinda weird in-game, and it didn't look as good when shrunken down. Otherwise, I think the logo looks okay when displayed small, but will nonetheless seriously consider a more horizontal version should the need for one arise.

Am I done yet?!?! :laugh:


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2016 9:13 pm 
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The text could do with some more detailed shading, like the spoon. The text looks out of place as it is now.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2016 10:24 pm 
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Yep, gonna be spending more time on the logo than the game itself. :thumbsup:
j/k, I completely agree. Better?


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It's a bit pillow shady but it softens the text up at least.

I think there's too much outlining going on for the main image though. There's 3 different colours of outline going on where one would probably suffice.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 1:34 am 
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Looks good with the gradient green line, although I don't think I want a drop shadow.
So, uh, is Kritter's logo good? Please tell me Kritter's logo is good. Or would it be better blue? Please respond, I want to be done with this logo, for I am having a stressful enough time with everything that is going on in the world tonight anyway. ^_^;

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I really liked yours, but Kritter's new details do look really nice. I think the green text needs to be saturated, though, 'cause it sorta blends into the outline.

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Thunder Dragon wrote:
Looks good with the gradient green line, although I don't think I want a drop shadow.
So, uh, is Kritter's logo good? Please tell me Kritter's logo is good. Or would it be better blue? Please respond, I want to be done with this logo, for I am having a stressful enough time with everything that is going on in the world tonight anyway. ^_^;


I tend to drop shadow everything just to make them stand out but that's just me :P

Call it done for now and work on the more important things. You can always go back to the logo later.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 3:14 am 
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Logo IS the most important thing to me right now. Only thing keeping me sane, really. :whoops:
Here's another attempt. And I'll keep doing more and more if need be (seriously, keep the critique coming!), but feel free to tell me when to stop. :P


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You're done, it's good :)

I really like the subtle colour change you did on the writing, looks great! I love it so much more than the original.

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If Kritter says it is done, then it is so! :thumbsup: Thank you everyone for the very thorough critique on this thing -- seriously, you all rock <3

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