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 Post subject: Re: Thunder Dragon presents: PSYCUTLERY
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 1:56 pm 
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Nice! I really dig that logo.
If I may suggest a slight change though - I'm a bit bothered by the way the highest points on each side of the title line up in a horizontal line but the bottom ones don't. It gives a sense of asymmetry that I don't feel is intentional, and it's a bit jarring to me personally. That's just my opinion, though. I guess if no-one else minds you're fine, but I felt like pointing it out anyway ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Thunder Dragon presents: PSYCUTLERY
PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 2:00 pm 
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LOL, now you're just nitpicking. ;P
But since I am also absurdly obsessive compulsive... does it bother anybody else?

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 2:05 pm 
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I mean, yeah, it's nitpicking, but why settle for anything other than perfection ;)
Oh yeah - to get actual progress on important stuff done :P

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 2:27 pm 
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doesnt really bother me at all, seems pretty good. The bottom still bothers me a little bit but nothing major, that's more in the line of the style of the bottom, but really its just nitpicking.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 4:53 pm 
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DJ Coco wrote:
That's just my opinion, though. I guess if no-one else minds you're fine, but I felt like pointing it out anyway ;)


I didn't mind until you pointed it out, now I can't unsee it. :whoops:

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 5:39 pm 
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If I need to make any changes, please speak now.

I am completely serious. Please.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 6:32 pm 
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I don't think so. I had a play around with what DJ Coco said in photoshop and oddly enough it looked worse to me when it was all lined up so I think what you have there is fine.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 6:39 pm 
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Thank you. And I apologize if I am coming off as overly negative, but... life stuff going on, you know? ^_^;

Anywho, I wanted the logo done because I intend to start up a website soon. Look forward to more info soon I guess, but in the mean time, keep tuned into @EyesEverything on Twitter (which is, again, a new account) for regular updates!

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 8:16 pm 
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Yeah, I don't think there is any changes that need to be added into the logo. It looks really fine right now. I'm looking to forward to seeing your website! :) Also, I checked out @EyesEverything on Twitter, and I liked what I saw about the game, especially the fact that you can set the game so that one can use the keyboard and another person can use the mouse, making an interesting kind of co-op gameplay. I'm looking forward to checking out the game's tech demo you had announced in there.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 8:56 pm 
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On co-op, it'd be great to have multiple controller support for that instead of Mouse + Keyboard/Controller, but that's a different can of worms.

I look forward to seeing the website!

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2016 5:19 pm 
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Yeah, the co-op is just a sort of fun extra. This was never meant to be a multiplayer game, but one time when I was out and testing it, I randomly handed the mouse to the first person who came by. We both had tons of fun. =D

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:34 pm 
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So the co-op is basically like Mario Galaxy's 'co-star' mode? Or something similar? That sounds pretty neat if so.

As for the new logo, it looks fine for me. Certainly a lot better than the old one, and something that would also probably look better at smaller sizes.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2016 3:19 pm 
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Hey TD, *LOVED* your older fangames. Very excited to see you making indie games, this looks very good! I like the logo a lot.

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