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Sprite Competition #20, Crab people, crab people...
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 Post subject: Re: Sprite Competition #20
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:32 am 
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Nacitendo Platinum wrote:
I enter:
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Looks nice, but could use some more visible shading.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:42 am 
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I tried my hardest on this one
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this is just a wip claw will be added later

CRITISUM IS NEEDED

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:19 am 
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Luigifan64 wrote:
I tried my hardest on this one
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this is just a wip claw will be added later

CRITISUM IS NEEDED

Let's see:
-The feet are lopsided and are too blocky.
-The body is too square and has some jaggies.
-There is no visible shading on the sprite. You need to have more contrast inbetween the shades.
-The readibility of the eyes is meh.

I think you should look up some spriting tutorials.
Heres one Gameboy posted a bit ago.

And you sig is bigger than the maximum space allowed.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:20 pm 
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Here is a WIP of Pinchley made by me. :D


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:22 pm 
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MarioSonicCouncil wrote:
Here is a WIP of Pinchley made by me. :D

Hmm... Shadings look about right for the eyes, but on the body, the shadings are in the right, not the left. Is this because of the light source? I guess that's okay then. Other than that, it looks alright! Good job! :D

And I made something like a crab a long time ago. However, it much needs editing.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:28 pm 
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TravixMan wrote:
And I made something like a crab a long time ago. However, it much needs editing.
You can't use that as an entry. The entire duration of the sprite has to be made within the duration of the competition.

 
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:05 am 
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UPDATE.
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added sidesteppers. i don't know if i'll add more crab subspecies to this.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:56 am 
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My entry so far. Crabber from SMG (or SMG2?).
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I need some critiques.

 
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:59 am 
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Because i can,
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 Post subject: Re: Sprite Competition #20
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:12 am 
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a wip Gif
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And my final entry:
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:22 am 
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This time it looks much better :)
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 Post subject: Re: Sprite Competition #20
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:55 am 
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I should have something done by later today.

If I don't take forever on TSR's Sprite Compo #1.


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:47 pm 
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Wiiboy4ever wrote:
TravixMan wrote:
And I made something like a crab a long time ago. However, it much needs editing.
You can't use that as an entry. The entire duration of the sprite has to be made within the duration of the competition.

Wasn't planning on using that.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:12 pm 
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RendyanSpriter wrote:
My entry so far. Crabber from SMG (or SMG2?).
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I need some critiques.


The shading is not correct everywhere but it's still a good entry.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:47 pm 
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RendyanSpriter wrote:
My entry so far. Crabber from SMG (or SMG2?).
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I need some critiques.


The shading is not correct everywhere but it's still a good entry.

Shading is just like the artwork (or it's not?).
Anyways, thank you.

 
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:48 pm 
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He means you have more than one lightsource.

I counted 3.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:30 pm 
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EDIT: Found some mistake about mouth. Will be fixed.

 
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:46 pm 
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DOUBLEPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOST!
I fixed mistakes in my crabber. But I didn't liked its look, so I decided to do a new one.
This one is PINCHLEY from Donkey Kong Country Returns. Here comes the EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICEST PIIIIIIXEL AAAART EVAAAAAAH!
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:16 am 
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Welp, here would be my entry:
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I plan on doing so much more with it, but I'll see what I can get done before the deadline.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:18 am 
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Welp, here would be my entry:
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I plan on doing so much more with it, but I'll see what I can get done before the competition ends

It's pretty epic, dude!
Good luck hosting next competition.

 
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