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You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought that capsule you were in exploded in space. So, there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!

I never understood the principals of past tense

I liked how beautiful it's feathers were

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Karen Kujou
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LangtonSoft
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Blutorus
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koopatroopa323
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Correction phase time! Now it's your turn to look at people's corrections and check if there are any mistakes or redundant changes in them! If you point out one, you must provide a correct solution.
If you point out a flaw and were right, you will gain a point. You can win up to 3 points so try not to point out more than 3 mistakes! If your proposed correction is wrong, you will lose 2 points.

Karen Kujou
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Tomato Correction
Did you know? According to the host of this game, you can even win some prizes! I'm sure to give this game my best shot! Rumor has it that it's going to be a Steam game. I'm so excited! Finally, here I come! I must have that game by all means!

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As she was leaving for her airplane, I waved her goodbye. I wish we had more time to spend together, but all good things come to an end eventually. I can't change my feelings about her, but I'm sure I will get over it someday. I guess until then, I just have to conceal them within me.

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Oh, you gave me so many presents! Thank you so much! You're really the best! I will return the favor someday, I promise! This is definitely the best Christmas I'll ever have, and it's all thanks to you!

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Tomato Correction Principals -> principles

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Tomato Correction: No-one does not need a hyphen.

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No changes.

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(Already corrected above). Also, if you were to use the dash it should be "I wish we had more time to spend together—but all good things come to an end eventually."
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(Already corrected above)

CouchTomato
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You never cease to surprise me, blue hedgehog. I thought the capsule you were in exploded in space. So there's more to you than just looking like me. Just what are you, anyway? I can't let you live. Your adventuring day are coming to an end!

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(Already corrected above)

koopatroopa323
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Tomato Correction
Yesterday, a bird flew over our heads. I liked how beautiful its feathers were. Makes me wish I had a bird of my own. (Very technically proper is it "It makes me wish..." but it's colloquially acceptable to leave out the "It" in this sentence... and no one actually says "It makes me wish," that it's actually less correct to change it.)

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I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got in sight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts, including their corrections. If only you haven't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text now. Thanks for nothing, jack ass.

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I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.

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Florida is considered the lightning capitol of the United States. Thunderstorm's are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightening are low, its a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to loose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices, remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.

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Florida is considered the lightning capital of the United States. Thunderstorms are a frequent event in this state, especially during the summer. While your odds of being struck by lightning are low, it's a good idea to head indoors as soon as you see lightning. Getting zapped by lightning is dangerous! Lightning can also hit power lines and cause you to lose electricity. Surges and spikes caused by lightning strikes can harm electronic devices. Remember to unplug your computer and game consoles during a thunderstorm.

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Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.

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Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.

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For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!

Correction:
For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn’t it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say!

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It was a nice sunny sunday afternoon, when Jake decided to go for a walk. The whether reports had forecasted an upcoming storm, but the sun has shined so bright, Jake thought to himself they are false. Suddenly a wild storm came up, and it started pouring heavy! Poor Jake has become all soaked! So Jake thought to himself "I should of known and trusted the reports!". I hope he'll take an umbrella with him next time!

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It was a nice sunny Sunday afternoon when Jake decided to go for a walk. The weather reports had forecast an upcoming storm, but the sun had been shining so brightly, Jake thought to himself they were false. Suddenly a wild storm came up and it started pouring heavily! Poor Jake became all soaked! So Jake thought to himself, "I should have known and trusted the reports!" I hope he takes an umbrella with him next time!

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He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.

Correction:
He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.

I am kind of upset that you became a global moderator now and got insight on all of the staff's top secret materials, such as the grammar texts with their corrections. If you hadn't applied, I wouldn't have to come up with a new text. Thanks for nothing, jackass.

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Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorius sureal killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.

Correction:
Okay, pick who it is in the line-up and we can finally lock up this notorious serial killer. Pick a number from one through four. The chosen guy by you will be sent to jail, the others we will let go.

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He had told me that he ain't needed money. I didn't buy his story thought, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in troubles? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he all most was kicked off his rental apartment. It's not like I mind to give a friend a financial boost.

Correction:
He had told me that he didn't need money. I didn't buy his story though, so I still borrowed him some cash. Why can't he just speak up when he's in trouble? Last time he fell quiet, claiming he had his money issues under control, he almost was kicked out of his rental apartment. It's not like I mind giving a friend a financial boost.

Posting here mainly because the topic is supposed to be unlocked during corrections.

Original Text:
For many years, peoples have thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, don't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had all ready figured out our planet was round - and even calculated it's perimeter! And yet, theirs a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back too school, I would say!

Correction:
For many years, people had thought that the Earth was flat. Nowadays, it seems quiet ridiculous to us, doesn't it? But here's a fun fact: Thousands of years before people finally realized the Earth was flat, someone had already figured out our planet was round - and even calculated its perimeter! And yet, there’s a small group of people that still thinks the Earth is shaped like a plate. Back to school, I would say!

Also, for the future, can you implement a time limit? Like at the very longest, one week? That was kinda ridiculous.

[*]"it seems quiet ridiculous to us" - "quiet" should be "quite"
[*]"people that still thinks" - "thinks" should be "think"[/list]

Six comments...In a row? And I got warned for doing the same even though I didn't know that was bad at the time.

So what's happening with this game anyway? Is this the final round or somthing?

EDIT: ok, I guess it's done...That was...An interesting experience...