CORRECTION PHASE - ROUND 3
I have some pretty bad luck with my beauty on four wheels lately. Recently my beautiful car had broken down. It's still in repair, so I can't go anywhere at the moment, which really sucks. I was looking forward to the roadtrip with my roommate, but it seems that he'll have to go alone. The engineer said that there's some issue with the motor that needs fixing, I really hope he can repair that. Probably the amount of money that I'm going to have to pay will be larger than what I'd have to pay for an entirely new car. But that car's like a daughter to me. I'd invest as much as I need to!
LangtonSoft's Correction:
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I've had some pretty bad luck with my beauty on four wheels lately. Recently, my beautiful car broke down. It's still in repair, so I can't go anywhere at the moment, which really sucks. I was looking forward to the roadtrip with my roommate, but it looks like he'll have to go alone. The engineer said that there's an issue with the motor that needs fixing; I really hope he can repair that. The amount of money that I'm going to have to pay will probably be larger than what I'd have to pay for an entirely new car. But that car's like a daughter to me. I'll invest as much as I need to!
I hate those people that get upset over the most trivial of grammar mistakes! It's quite pitysome to not have to worry about more important things in life, they really need to have less pet peeves related to grammar. They act like a few errors here and there gave them cancer, e.g. gave them a headache from reading them. Just because some people don't know there grammar doesn't mean they should act like jerks towards them. That's just not okay by me. But whatever, I'm not one to judge. But neither are they!
AsteriskX's Correction:
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I hate those people that get upset over the most trivial of grammar mistakes! It's quite pity-some to not have to worry about more important things in life, they really need to have less pet peeves related to grammar. They act like a few errors here and there gave them cancer, e.g. gave them a headache from reading them. Just because some people don't know their grammar doesn't mean they should act like jerks towards them. That's just not okay by me. But whatever, I'm not one to judge. But neither are they!
If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My anchestors have built this palace centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks as new, if it weren't for the architecture that proves of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother in law and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.
CouchTomato's Correction:
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If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My ancestors had built this place centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks just as new, if it weren't for the architecture that is proof of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother-in-law, and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.
Koopatroopa323's Correction:
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If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My ancestors have built this palace centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks as new, if it weren't for the architecture that proves of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother in law, and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.
CORRECTION PHASE - ROUND 3
I have some pretty bad luck with my beauty on four wheels lately. Recently my beautiful car had broken down. It's still in repair, so I can't go anywhere at the moment, which really sucks. I was looking forward to the roadtrip with my roommate, but it seems that he'll have to go alone. The engineer said that there's some issue with the motor that needs fixing, I really hope he can repair that. Probably the amount of money that I'm going to have to pay will be larger than what I'd have to pay for an entirely new car. But that car's like a daughter to me. I'd invest as much as I need to!
LangtonSoft's Correction:
[quote]I've had some pretty bad luck with my beauty on four wheels lately. Recently, my beautiful car broke down. It's still in repair, so I can't go anywhere at the moment, which really sucks. I was looking forward to the roadtrip with my roommate, but it looks like he'll have to go alone. The engineer said that there's an issue with the motor that needs fixing; I really hope he can repair that. The amount of money that I'm going to have to pay will probably be larger than what I'd have to pay for an entirely new car. But that car's like a daughter to me. I'll invest as much as I need to![/quote]
I hate those people that get upset over the most trivial of grammar mistakes! It's quite pitysome to not have to worry about more important things in life, they really need to have less pet peeves related to grammar. They act like a few errors here and there gave them cancer, e.g. gave them a headache from reading them. Just because some people don't know there grammar doesn't mean they should act like jerks towards them. That's just not okay by me. But whatever, I'm not one to judge. But neither are they!
AsteriskX's Correction:
[quote]I hate those people that get upset over the most trivial of grammar mistakes! It's quite pity-some to not have to worry about more important things in life, they really need to have less pet peeves related to grammar. They act like a few errors here and there gave them cancer, e.g. gave them a headache from reading them. Just because some people don't know their grammar doesn't mean they should act like jerks towards them. That's just not okay by me. But whatever, I'm not one to judge. But neither are they![/quote]
If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My anchestors have built this palace centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks as new, if it weren't for the architecture that proves of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother in law and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.
CouchTomato's Correction:
[quote]If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My ancestors had built this place centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks just as new, if it weren't for the architecture that is proof of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother-in-law, and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.[/quote]
Koopatroopa323's Correction:
[quote]If you would follow me, ladies and gentlemen, this is the central room. My ancestors have built this palace centuries ago, and it has always been rather well taken care of. It still looks as new, if it weren't for the architecture that proves of the time it was built in. My sister, my brother in law, and I intend on modernizing this place to combine both modern architecture and classic baroque. I hope our future generations will value the efforts we will put in revamping this ancient house.[/quote]