In this Topic I will show off my Sprite Comics! Here's the first one! :biggrin: [img]http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/28688/spritecomic1.png[/img]

[quote="SuperMario198"]In this Topic I will show off my Sprite Comics! Here's the first one! :biggrin: [img]http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/28688/spritecomic1.png[/img][/quote] that looks wrong, no offense.

Nice! :) Here are some recommendations I have: I think you should use a nicer font, and maybe text bubbles of some sort. Also, you should try to keep the styles a little more consistent, as the Mario & Luigi sprites are a different style than the SMB3 ground and background.

Here's the second comic! I'm not sure if I'm allowed to show Zelda ones... [img]http://bin.smwcentral.net/u/28688/spritecomic2.png[/img]

You're allowed to show whatever comics you want haha. As long as they aren't rule-breaking. EDIT: Also I highly recommend one of these options: 1. Choose your font color based on the colors behind the text. That comic really needed lighter colors 2. Better yet, give your text a border. A black border around white text, for instance. 3. Alternatively, use a speech bubble.