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Author:  SilverVortex [ Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:48 am ]
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Auction Lemon wrote:
Evil Yoshi Toes wrote:
I think Mario could use a bit more shading on his outfit, unless you're adding that later. His arms seem to lack a light source, watch out for that. Also yeah, Luigi needs a hat in order to be recognizable. His muscles could also use some work. Take a look at Popeye and see how his muscles were handled. Even though they aren't realistic they should still have sensible structure to them. Also watch out for jagged edges.

Thanks for the constructive criticism, the thing with Luigi is that I wanted him to be a redneck gangster wannabe. So that is why I gave him a bandana instead of a hat.

Now that I see that, I feel pretty stupid about that last comment of mine. -_- Sorry. I was just telling you how I felt about it. Another thing, the arms of Mario look a little pillowshaded. :whoops: Once again, sorry if I hurt you on the inside.
Author:  Willsaber [ Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:58 pm ]
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I once gave Mario a trucker hat and MFGG flipped out.
Author:  Auction Lemon [ Fri Jun 16, 2017 5:41 pm ]
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Willsaber wrote:
I once gave Mario a trucker hat and MFGG flipped out.

I know what you mean. I used to be like that when I was younger. I think I might make game out of it... :think:
Author:  Old Yuanxian [ Fri Jun 16, 2017 10:41 pm ]
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I'M SORRY!!! I just been so busy that I just can't be in the mood to make a proper reply, so I better refrain from making one at all. I am popping in to thank the praise, though I also need to state that I am procrastinating the digital artwork of my drawing because... I am still questioning my skills, so will leave it as concept art for the moment until I can get the concept looking as my expectation desires.

And this... I was sketching it a bit on my smartphone using my index finger on PicsArt app. Just a base, plus still needing fixes before I paint over it:

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Author:  SuperArthurBros [ Sat Jun 17, 2017 12:04 am ]
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You did that on a mobile device? Holy cow, that looks so cool! I can't even draw a proper square in these. :laugh:
I have to say this sketch has got to be your best work, the lines are so precise, the face looks just right and so does the hair, even being it a cluster of lines.
Author:  Physix [ Sat Jun 17, 2017 1:11 am ]
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Black Serafuku wrote:
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:thumbsup:
Just gotta add some space to the left to make it centered and you'll be good


Edit: 3 hours later
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Author:  SonicZetrex [ Fri Jun 23, 2017 3:23 am ]
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This is the image of the sunset from my art board:
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Anything I need to fix or put before I make it an accomplishment in "DA"
Author:  Vertette [ Fri Jun 23, 2017 12:29 pm ]
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I'd move those lighter clouds around the sun further away, because right now it's a bit too busy.
Author:  Yakibomb [ Fri Jun 23, 2017 1:42 pm ]
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Vertette wrote:
I'd move those lighter clouds around the sun further away, because right now it's a bit too busy.

I agree. My suggestion is to remove them altogether. Keep the two on the far left, but remove the rest?
Author:  Evil Yoshi Toes [ Fri Jun 23, 2017 2:11 pm ]
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I think that bottom cloud is also a bit too close to the horizon line, it looks a little awkward there
Author:  CatoNator [ Sat Jun 24, 2017 8:08 am ]
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The sun's reflection should be longer and wider to match the sun's shape.
Author:  SonicZetrex [ Sun Jun 25, 2017 8:36 pm ]
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I did fix some things, well, is there anything else? ^_^

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Author:  Evil Yoshi Toes [ Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:47 am ]
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I would obliterate the two white clouds near the sun. They're a bit distracting and don't add much to the composition in my opinion. Also, the land mass ends right on the edge of the suns reflection, creating tension that draws attention to an area that's not all that interesting. To fix that you could either make the land mass longer so it overlaps the reflection (which could also help create depth, so i think this is the better solution), or shorter so it's further away. The lighting on the land mass is also a bit strange. Keep in mind that the sun in this case is the main light source. Speaking of lighting, adding a little glow to the edge of the dark clouds could help, since they are backlit, though I'd still keep a pixel thick darker edge to keep the volume of them. Otherwise, I think it looks quite pretty! :)
Author:  SonicZetrex [ Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:13 pm ]
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Thanks for the advisable way of explaining the flaws I have to fix, even though it's already too late that I've already showed it in "DA". :(
By the way, the "dark clouds" are actually mountains. :P
Author:  Physix [ Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:38 pm ]
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SonicZetrex wrote:
Thanks for the advisable way of explaining the flaws I have to fix, even though it's already too late that I've already showed it in "DA". :(
By the way, the "dark clouds" are actually mountains. :P


Where's the mountain's reflection?
Author:  Old Yuanxian [ Tue Jul 04, 2017 9:32 pm ]
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I am alive, I guess
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Some sketching I did last night while staying up. It took me a while to realize I made some silly mistakes in the pose and clothing consistency, with the great help from my graphic designer best friend. This is supposed to be a gift for another best friend of mine, but I just sent him this in the meantime, until I can enhance it and paint much later on (I don't feel ready to fulfill my expectation on this piece yet).

(using my bigger Lanix phone this time, in case you noticed the layout difference)

SuperArthurBros wrote:
You did that on a mobile device? Holy cow, that looks so cool! I can't even draw a proper square in these. :laugh:
I have to say this sketch has got to be your best work, the lines are so precise, the face looks just right and so does the hair, even being it a cluster of lines.

Physix wrote:
:thumbsup:
Just gotta add some space to the left to make it centered and you'll be good

Right, it's just the zoomed screenshot I took, in order to make sure all of it is visible. Tbh I am not really deciding on canvas size yet, as I am just sketching without everything planned. Maybe I can crop later on... in case I ever finish it someday.

(thanks to you 2, by the way)
Author:  Old Yuanxian [ Sun Jul 30, 2017 1:45 pm ]
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I have this messy base sketch for something unclear in my mind. Tbh, I am not entirely sure if it's 100% right, even as just a base; so any possible advice is welcome~
Author:  GameBoyEnhance [ Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:49 pm ]
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Hi, I'm back, here's a MS paint Mario.

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Author:  SilverVortex [ Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:48 am ]
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this is a character NOBODY KNOWS ABOUT.
from a game NOBODY KNOWS ABOUT.
and it's an animatio-oh, it's pretty clear that it's an idle animation. oops.
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Author:  KirbyLover2048 [ Wed Aug 02, 2017 2:24 pm ]
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Something I submitted to the mainsite. Opinions are welcome.
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