Their animation speed here is not how they are meant to be in-game, and I don't know how to make the walk cycle less choppy.

i think the walk cycle is fine animation-wise, the only issue i have with it is that it's hard to tell which foot is which in a few frames.

Im waiting for my sheet to be submiteed and stil nothing.... But here is the sheet

Outline by Betatronic [img]https://s18.postimg.org/j77p8zu95/rundll32_2017-05-21_02-41-38.png[/img] Rendered by me [img]https://s29.postimg.org/wbco3jjcn/Photoshop_2017-05-21_23-04-36.png[/img]

Looks very epic!

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woah. That looks super nice!

How do people find time in their lives to create such amazing things. It looks like it could be in a licensed game.

[quote="zXspriter"]How do people find time in their lives to create such amazing things.[/quote] Dawg, it only took 2 days. Using Photoshop honest to god feels like cheating. Edit: [img]https://s29.postimg.org/lftyspel3/5pice_IDE_2017-05-27_15-17-55.png[/img]

[spoiler][img]https://image.ibb.co/mU33ha/18671082_230738187423291_3858020948258047391_n.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Just a sketch to be digitally edited later, to enhance depth and the minor details that are hard to see to my eyes (especially the hand holding the heart, which took me 70% of the time even though I had a clear reference, but trying to see the minor stroke details in the paper makes my eyes hurt so I just keep messing up like it's no use). Feedback is appreciated! (no, I'm not that unappreciative asshole anymore).

Arms look a little short and skinny, but I think the rest looks fine. You've definitely improved.

[quote="Kirby's Adventure"]Arms look a little short and skinny, but I think the rest looks fine. You've definitely improved.[/quote] Yeah, there is something about the arms that I want to fix. The "short" and "skinny" looks are both results of some sort of measuring imperfection in attempt to add some perspective to the drawing, but I can take care of that better when making the digital edit plus some harder looking at a 3D reference with a better angle. And thanks, it's good news to hear that the rest looks fine! Something I would never hear honestly about my past artworks, which are definitely nothing I can be proud of. I still got a long way to go so far, but guess I've started to catch up.

You're improving!

Yeah, you're showing quite a bit of improvement lately. Colour me impressed.

Can't tell whether WIP or finished. [img]https://s30.postimg.org/ia9qaqirl/Photoshop_2017-06-01_01-21-30.png[/img] A concept that evolved from an earlier sprite sketch: [img]https://s21.postimg.org/oi0bpu7cn/New_Ava.png[/img] [img]https://s30.postimg.org/9lyat9dap/2017-05-31_22-56-38.gif[/img]

Making some new tiles inspired by SWM2: YI. Here's what I've done so far. [img]https://puu.sh/w9myZ/21303bfd73.png[/img]

[quote="Shikaternia"]post[/quote] That looks pretty good! Though, there's some pillow shading on the vine's leaves that you should fix. And, I think the foliage would look better if it had some shine applied to it as it kinda looks pretty flat compared to wall/ground ferns.

@Black Serafuku: You've improved! :D I like how you made use of different eye style and rosy cheeks, those make her look cute and child-like. @Shikaternia: You just made me want to play YI again... I like the tiles, but I think you should make the tree leaves like the yellow ones on the green rock.

[quote="Psid"][quote="Shikaternia"]post[/quote] That looks pretty good! Though, there's some pillow shading on the vine's leaves that you should fix. And, I think the foliage would look better if it had some shine applied to it as it kinda looks pretty flat compared to wall/ground ferns.[/quote] Agreed. :agree: Unfortunately, I'm not really sure how to go about shading the leaves to solve this issue.

[img]https://s14.postimg.org/eblw5gufl/Photoshop_2017-06-03_22-51-29.jpg[/img] ... First time I've ever colored a black and white composition. It's so damn hard, feels like I've hit a brick wall. The composition has too much negative space on the left, the two ships point outside of the frame (horrible thing to do), the lighting and atmospheric details are massively inconsistent, and there are no clear boundaries between foreground, middle, and background. It's difficult to tell scale and distance. Next time I can't possibly fuck it up this bad.

Next time you should keep the rule of thirds more in mind while compositing.