I tried to make some custom sprites and I want some feedback/critique so I can get better at spriting. The cobrat is a WIP. [img]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/7150/blooppara.png[/img]

Hmmm... the huge blooper... what's wrong with its eyes? It looks as if both eyes are avoiding each other. As for the parabeetle...... shading is not so good. It lacks shade at the top making it lifeless. Other than that, it's pretty good!

Shade at the top meaning, a third color?

[quote="HmniND"]Shade at the top meaning, a third color?[/quote] Exactly. Adding a bright highlight makes the shell look real and not flat. I would personally suggest that you also fix up the colours on your sprites. On the blooper, there isn't enough contrast, and on the beetle, the brighter red shade looks too orange and harsh. You have a good start though!

UPDATED! Also two new WIP sprites, you can compare to the first ones I did. And thanks for all the feedback! [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7150/blooppara.png[/img] I just noticed, the buzzy beetle isn't supposed to be on there.

Again, what's with the Big Blooper's eyes?

Well, what do you want me to do about the shading, make it circlier? And as for the eyes, did you mean how the look like they go away from eachother?

The blooper's eyes are derpy. If that's not what you want then you should change it but honestly I like it like that. It reminds me of OmegaF's Blarg here: http://www.mfgg.net/index.php?act=resdb&param=02&c=1&id=21619

Actually OmegaF is sort of who I wanted to be like (Not that it hsould be like his sprites but that I could be as creative and as good a spriter as him.) So I guess I can leave the stylizing in?

Do you mind if I show you a little edit on the beetle so you understand what I'm saying?

Of course! That would be great!