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Author:  No Name [ Fri Sep 11, 2015 1:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Hello , in my game Rajoy Ataca EN ESPAÑA(Translated to : Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN) (Temporaly a private project) Im using my own music , but its relative similar to the Luigi's Mansion music , i made too similar , but the music was planned for the beta , and now , i need to change music , The project will be explained tomorrow and will have a video of the beta.


The trailer will be released in forums.mfgg... HERE
Author:  Gato [ Fri Sep 11, 2015 3:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
Welcome. Be sure to read the rules before posting. Since you don't have anything to show for this project yet, I'm afraid I have to lock this thread.

I hope to see what's in store for us tomorrow, though.

EDIT by DJ Coco: Once you have something to show PM an admin or moderator so they can unlock this topic for you to post your trailer in.
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 5:52 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
Here is the trailer :
Author:  Mors [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 12:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
I liked some of your ideas, but it just doesn't look good at all. The graphics are bad looking, physics doesn't seem that good and the level design is below avarage. I would make a more detailed post, but my detailed feedbacks are usually ignored. :/
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 2:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
But... is my second game , and my first game... was horrible compared with this...
Author:  CatoNator [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 2:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
I recognise that purple basher. I see you're another "Luigi's Mansion Beta" fan.
Yeah I too don't really like what I see and especially not what I hear. The song only has one tone... usually music has some kind of melody, but this is just a rhythm.
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 2:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Need music in my game!!
Im not a luigi's mansion beta fan , only , i like the ideas of the beta , and i made the song for trailer pruposes
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 4:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
OK...

Ok ... What I have to do to make this game a better game?

More Levels?
New Animations?
Better Levels?
Better Animations?(I think that the animations are ok)
Better Enemy IA?
All?

AND... THE HISTORY OF THIS GAME STARTS IN 2012 , IT WAS THE FIRST TIME THAT I LEARN SOME OF CODE , I START A PROJECT IN GAME MAKER... THE PROJECT WAS PLANNED FOR A ARCADE...YES A ARCADE MACHINE... A VIRUS WAS ENTERED ON MY PC , AND I LOST ALL THE GAME DATA... AND NOW , IN 2015 , I GOT SOME BACKUPS FIXING MY OTHER PC'S HD (THE VIRUS PC) AND IM REMAKING IT
Author:  Mors [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 4:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Better graphics.
Better physics.
Better level design.
These are the only major issues I saw in that trailer.
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 4:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
pysics? Im beginner , is my seco.. no , my third game... ok , my fir... AH , ok is my 4th game , i think... and i don't know ho are "pysics" i think are collisions and gravity....
Author:  Willsaber [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 5:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
I believe Mors is using the term, "physics" to refer to your gravity, acceleration, deceleration, and skidding mechanics, among other things. The physics seem really static and rather un-interesting.
Author:  No Name [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 5:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Ok...
The starts of some games and companys arn't good...
Author:  Can of Nothing [ Sat Sep 12, 2015 10:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
No Name wrote:
Ok...
The starts of some games and companys arn't good...

That's not a very good way to attract a musician's interest.

The game is... Very mediocre, to be frank. The jumping controls appear to lack momentum, acceleration and everything most well-crafted platformers tend to have - it reminds me of the worst things about many a smartphone indie platformer. The gameplay offers little other than the bare-bones, it appears - I have no idea what significance the "Purple Basher" has, and how it affects gameplay, but it doesn't look like much. Your graphics are considerably disappointing as well, after looking at your models; I expected something around the quality you offered in your modelling topic.

No Name wrote:
Ok ... What I have to do to make this game a better game?

I think you might want to think about its overall design a little. What do you want to accomplish, gameplay-wise, with the game? What unique ideas do you think you can bring to the table? How will other aspects of the game reflect this? Many, if not most, professionally-made games handle this with careful precision, and I think it's something you could take notes of.

Would I be interested in writing for this game, as it is? Frankly, my answer would be a solid, resounding "No". I hope you don't take that as an insult, however - I'm just trying to offer you my honest criticism.
Author:  Hero [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 12:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
*Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN*
I don't get this name could you explain?
Author:  No Name [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 4:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Hero wrote:
*Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN*
I don't get this name could you explain?

Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN

Rajoy : The president of spain (current president)

Attacks IN SPAIN : Rajoy (President) Attacks (Wage cuts, wage freezes officials, corruption, etc ..) IN SPAIN : (Oviusly , in spain)

Also , i'm not a comunist , only a comedian
Author:  No Name [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 4:30 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Can of Nothing wrote:
No Name wrote:
Ok...
The starts of some games and companys arn't good...

That's not a very good way to attract a musician's interest.

The game is... Very mediocre, to be frank. The jumping controls appear to lack momentum, acceleration and everything most well-crafted platformers tend to have - it reminds me of the worst things about many a smartphone indie platformer. The gameplay offers little other than the bare-bones, it appears - I have no idea what significance the "Purple Basher" has, and how it affects gameplay, but it doesn't look like much. Your graphics are considerably disappointing as well, after looking at your models; I expected something around the quality you offered in your modelling topic.

No Name wrote:
Ok ... What I have to do to make this game a better game?

I think you might want to think about its overall design a little. What do you want to accomplish, gameplay-wise, with the game? What unique ideas do you think you can bring to the table? How will other aspects of the game reflect this? Many, if not most, professionally-made games handle this with careful precision, and I think it's something you could take notes of.

Would I be interested in writing for this game, as it is? Frankly, my answer would be a solid, resounding "No". I hope you don't take that as an insult, however - I'm just trying to offer you my honest criticism.


The music for the trailer was made for TRAILER purposes , ok , i will publish a gameplay with his music , my music it's "plagiarized" from luigi's mansion , and its made in famitracker , yes...

And the graphics... What i need to change? color palette? shapes? what? (The character is a dog)(Rottweiler)
The enemys are the VAT and the "purple basher" was made for testing purposes
Author:  Mors [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 6:36 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Please avoid double posting in the future.

And I don't think CoN mentioned your music at all.

The graphics look really bad and I think you need to remake all of them. These shadow effects look bad, shapes are bad and there is no shading all. And is that a DOG?! It looks nothing like a dog, sorry.
Author:  No Name [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 7:59 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
Mors wrote:

And is that a DOG?! It looks nothing like a dog, sorry.


A cartoon dog
Author:  Hero [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 9:00 am ]
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You should accept the criticism your given instead of avoiding it because it sounds negative when where trying to help you out :biggrin:.

I have not gave negative feedback and was just wondering what the name had to do with anything :whoops:
but I guess I should give some feedback.

Also even if its your second game that does not mean it has to be a bad game or very decent game!

-The dog looks like an edit of smb3 Mario but I guess I sorta see how its a dog. if you look hard enough
-The music is not too bad actually.
-The physics need quite a bit of work.
-The graphics should be changed as they look abit paintish and theres no shading. look at those graphics compared to these WARNING BIG IMAGES Spoiler:


That is all I have to say about the game please use this criticism that me and other people above posted you there not trying to be negative and are just trying to help you update your game to make it better.
Author:  CatoNator [ Sun Sep 13, 2015 9:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Rajoy Attacks IN SPAIN
You won't improve without negative comments.
The graphics are okay at most. I'm guessing the main character is the "anthro" dog present in one of your YouTube videos.
The worst offender to me are the physics. The character has no momentum, he's way too fast and jumps too far.
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